The following writing is one tiny story from my novel, which I mentioned in my first post of this blog. This story is part of the seventh chapter of the second part of the third book of the trilogy: "Now Disclosed Was Concealed". I will let you read it, and don't feel shy to comment :p
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Lub-dupp, lub-dupp, it was the sound of my heartbeat. I could hear, which meant that my senses were anew back. I was alive once again.
Speechless.
My eyes were still closed wanting to see if I could breath. The smell of autumn leaves falling due to its breeze flowing soothingly refreshing my long dark brown hair and my one-fist tall dark brown beard. I moved my head up towards the sky and felt the pureness of the air and the calmness of the place. My heartbeat faded as I realised that there were birds all around me dancing and singing with such lovely lyrics that I could never understand. Maybe they were not singing, but probably praising God as I was. I was alive.
I sat upright and held my arms onto my knees. I opened my eyes and the sun flashed its gold rays upon me. What a beautiful day it must have been. I admired this beauty. I always dreamt of this scenery for some reason.
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I hope you enjoyed reading it. Don't forget:
All rights reserved Ibn Ummat Al-Qura'an 2006
11 comments:
Allah ybarek feek broOTa =)
& somehow when u're happy.. u can feel urself livin over there.. and when u feel that.. u would never want to leave that feeling, even if it meant that u should go to that place in reality.. =)
Very Well written mashalla (^^,)
Keep up UR high SPIRITS!! (Y)
mashalla very well written i can imagine the place right now...
rabey eybarek fek
miraclegirl : true i was happy and full of hope and inspiration :D
thnx 4 ur amazing comment ^_^
funky~star : mashalla, thnx for letting me know that u were imagining it ^_^
yezachalla kel 5air 3ala raddech :D
franciscko thnx for passing by
very cool
I felt like holding the book
turning the page to continue reading,
I really luved this peice of writing,
Waiting for the coming part =)
:: Allah ybarek feek inshallah ::
missfikrah wo feech barak... its great to hear ur feelings towards the story...
thnx for commenting and 2nshalla i'll c u again ^_^
mashaAllah 3alick bro
may Allah bless ur soul and guide u to the way of paradise o Allah yejm3na feha kelna ,... imagine this view with el rasol 9ala Allah 3laih w salam
ALLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
walla my heart beated so hard youm t5ylt ha el mn9'ar ...
sub7an Allah
=)
great words and I bet it would be great novel ..
waiting for more
Liked the writing masha Allah...
Taranee I always favor the wa9f parts in novels... I always think that it's better to put the reader in the story instead of saying it at once... ya3nee 7eloo ennek 3ayyashtna... Allah yebarek fee awgatek, o yerzegk Jannat el ferdous =)
h2o : thnx alot for the wonderful comment, u boosted my selfesteem ^_________^
mashalla, when i read ur comment i immediately imagined the scene u mentioned, and it was fabulous, gorgous, watever u wanna call it ^_______^
Allah yed5lch jannateh elferdows
ms. rosie : yezachalla kel 5air sis for the nice comment, its good to know that ppl really lived the scene, because that was my intention, and el7amdella it worked ^_________^
Allah ywaffegch feddenya wel2a5ereh wo yed5lch jannateh elferdows
mashaAllah Tbarak Allah well written,
reminded me of the days where i was able to write .. now its a lost skill.. alhamdulillah 3ala julee 7al..
May we take the path that leads us to il Jannah.. Ameen
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